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This chapter sings! Lately, I have been in a poetry deep dive. This chapter reads like poetry in various parts, with a pleasing musicality and a tender treatment of poverty. I love your writing, and this chapter is going to stick with me long afterwards.

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Thank you! Totally unintentional poetic tone, as poetry is something I've always struggled with :)

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Love the description of how Aria's power worked. Matches the panic she was feeling and pouring it on until the threat was gone.

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